Studio Brief 4 - Only Feedback Crit

In today's final crit session, Only the design company was also taking part in the group crits. Only created the content for Brief 4, so it was important for their feedback to see how we all got on. For the crit, I showed the desktop and mobile versions of the site on the software 'Justinmind' this allowed me to demonstrates the designs as if they were live, especially showing the interactive touch points on mobile.

In terms of feedback for my concept it was all positive and wasn't a lot of constructive criticism. My group all liked my concept, which they said was a great way to bring the users back once the album has been release. The main feedback was the text size in the information pop up box. They felt that it was hard to read at the current size and should be set up how I had designed the 'submitting' pop up, as the submitting pop up took up a lot of the page, therefore I would have more space to increase the text size. Below are the information screens where the group thought the text was too small.

The images below are the updated designs where I have used the text within the same style as the 'submitting screen pop up'. You can clearly see the changes I've made from the feedback are a lot more appropriate and effective for the user to fully see the text without any hesitation or difficulty. Overall, the feedback session was a big success, even though I didn't get that much feedback but for the feedback i got, i could effectively implement that feedback to improve my campaign and user journey.